diff --git a/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/concepts/Title List.tid b/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/concepts/Title List.tid
index 67bb4e339..674e40c7a 100644
--- a/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/concepts/Title List.tid	
+++ b/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/concepts/Title List.tid	
@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ type: text/vnd.tiddlywiki
 
 A <<.def "title list">> is a line of text that presents one or more tiddler titles, strung together with a space between each one and the next.
 
-If a title <<.em contains>> a space, it needs double square brackets around it:
+If a title contains a space, it needs double square brackets around it:
 
 `GettingStarted [[Discover TiddlyWiki]] Upgrading`
 
-Title lists are used in various places, including PermaLinks and the ListField.
+Title lists are used in various places, most frequently and usefully in PermaLinks and the ListField. Since the concept of ~TiddlyWiki is the assembly of small pieces of information into larger texts, identifying the "small pieces" is an essential skill.
 
 They are in fact the simplest case of a [[filter|Filters]], and are thus a way of expressing a [[selection of titles|Title Selection]].