diff --git a/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/wikitext/Macro Definitions in WikiText.tid b/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/wikitext/Macro Definitions in WikiText.tid
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--- a/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/wikitext/Macro Definitions in WikiText.tid	
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@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 caption: Macro Definitions
 created: 20150220181617000
-modified: 20171215152754837
+modified: 20180820165115455
 tags: WikiText
 title: Macro Definitions in WikiText
 type: text/vnd.tiddlywiki
 
 A [[macro|Macros]] is defined using a `\define` [[pragma|Pragma]]. Like any pragma, this can only appear at the start of a tiddler.
 
-The first line of the definition specifies the macro name and any parameters. Each parameter has a name and, optionally, a default value that is used if no value is supplied on a particular call to the macro. The lines that follow contain the macro's text (i.e. the snippet represented by the macro name), until `\end` appears on a line by itself:
+The first line of the definition specifies the macro name and any parameters. Each parameter has a name and, optionally, a default value that is used if no value is supplied on a particular call to the macro. The lines that follow contain the text of the macro text (i.e. the snippet represented by the macro name), until `\end` appears on a line by itself:
 
 <$codeblock code={{$:/editions/tw5.com/macro-examples/say-hi}}/>
 
@@ -20,20 +20,21 @@ Alternatively, the entire definition can be presented on a single line without a
 A more formal [[presentation|Macro Definition Syntax]] of this syntax is also available.
 
 !! Accessing variables and parameters
-Inside the macro there are a few methods for accessing variables and parameters defined outside of the macro or in the macro parameter list. 
+
+Inside the macro there are several methods for accessing variables defined outside of the macro or parameters from the macro parameter list. 
 
 |syntax|description|h
-|`$...$`|parameter defined in the macro parameters list|
-|`<<__...__>>`|parameter defined in the macro parameters list but the syntax evaluates the parameter as it is invoked|
-|`$(...)$`|variable placeholder to variable defined outside of the macro|
-|`<<...>>`|variable invocation of variable (or other macro) defined outside of the macro|
+|`$...$`|Text substitution of a parameter defined in the macro parameters list |
+|`<<__...__>>`|Parameter-as-variable access to a parameter defined in the macro parameters list |
+|`$(...)$`|Text substitution of a variable defined outside of the macro |
+|`<<...>>`|Access to a variable (or other macro) defined outside of the macro |
 <br>
 
 !!! Placeholders `$(...)$`
 
 The macro can contain placeholders for parameters. These consist of a parameter name between dollar signs, like `$this$`.
 
-It can also contain placeholders for [[variables|Variables]]. These consist of a variable name (or macro name) between dollar signs and round brackets, like `$(this)$`.
+The macro can also contain placeholders for [[variables|Variables]]. These consist of a variable name (or macro name) between dollar signs and round brackets, like `$(this)$`.
 
 The actual value of the parameter or variable is substituted for the placeholder whenever the macro is called: