diff --git a/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/hellothere/HelloThere.tid b/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/hellothere/HelloThere.tid index a0e3333a2..9de47c34e 100644 --- a/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/hellothere/HelloThere.tid +++ b/editions/tw5.com/tiddlers/hellothere/HelloThere.tid @@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ type: text/vnd.tiddlywiki ''Have you ever had the feeling that your head is not quite big enough to hold everything you need to remember?'' -Welcome to TiddlyWiki, a unique [[non-linear|Philosophy of Tiddlers]] notebook for capturing, organising and sharing complex information. It boosts your brain power as a bicycle boosts the power of your body. +Welcome to TiddlyWiki, a unique [[non-linear|Philosophy of Tiddlers]] notebook for capturing, organising and sharing complex information. -Use it to keep your to-do list, to plan an essay or novel, or to organise your wedding. Record every thought that crosses your brain, or build a flexible, responsive website for publishing a manifesto. +Use it to keep your to-do list, to plan an essay or novel, or to organise your wedding. Record every thought that crosses your brain, or build a flexible and responsive website.
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